WALT: re-reading to check that their writing makes sense and that verbs to indicate time are used correctly and consistently.
S2S- Re-read your work, have you used:
- expanded noun phrases
- past/present tense
- different sentence types
Check that you have used the same tense throughout. If you have written you ending in past tense, make sure that it is the same throughout.
Use your green pen to correct or make changes to your work! Once you have done this you can upload it on the blog or on teams and I will give you some feedback.