WALT: writing narratives about personal experiences of others.

S2S- Use your planning to alter the ending of the story. 

        Use your story mountain to help with your writing. 

        Use the language features that we have learnt- adverbs, expanded noun phrases, past/present tense, different sentence types and conjunctions. 

When doing your writing, check that you are using the language features. Remember it narrative writing so it needs to be detailed and tell a story. Once you have finished you could draw a picture that goes with your writing. 

You are changing the problem, solution and the ending so make sure it is a good, long piece of writing. 

Tomorrow I will upload a checklist for you to green pen your writing against. I can't wait to hear them.