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Tuesday 19th January 2021


WALT- Write the beginning of the story 'The Elephant and the Bad Baby'.


Read the beginning of the story that you wrote yesterday (this should lead up to the elephant and the baby stealing food but should not include this). If you have not finished this part of the story then please use today to continue writing until it is finished. 


If you have written the beginning of the story please go through your writing and underline all the nouns using a coloured pencil (Nouns- people, places, animals or things). If you have already done this that is great! Now children should rewrite the beginning of their story and when they reach a noun ( an underlined noun ) they can add an adjective before they write the noun to help edit and improve their sentences. Children can do this for all their nouns but must ensure their writing still makes sense.