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WALT: edit & improve a story

 

Watch both videos to understand the importance of redrating, editing and improving your work. After you have watched both videos, complete the activities on the bottom.

https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/articles/zmbr47h

 

Next I want you to use the checklist in the English support file to help you identify all the features in your own story.  Use your coloured pencils to do this, like we have before in class.

 

After you have found the features in the story, what steps to success do you need? Are you missing features or do you think it could be improved?

 

I would like you to give at least two steps forwards and then apply what you have practised and 'green pen' your own work like you would in class. 

 

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