Today you are going to be reading through your story, using the checklist to make sure you have included everything. If there is something you need to add or change, you should do this by using a green pen. 

WALT: make simple additions, revisions and corrections to their own writing by proofreading to check for errors in spelling, grammar and punctuation.

S2S: Use the checklist. 

       make any additions or changes using a green pen. 

I look forward to hearing or reading your stories- you could post a picture of it on teams or record yourself reading it.