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WALT: make simple additions, revisions and corrections to their own writing by proofreading to check for errors in spelling, grammar and punctuation.

S2S: Re-read your story opening.

       Use the checklist. 

       Use the support page.

       Make changes to your writing using green pen. 

Use the checklist to check your story opening.

Your task is to check your story opening- does it include all of the language features we have discussed on Teams and have you been able to tick each part of the check list? 

Using a green pen, I want you to re-write any sentences that need improving and make changes to your writing so that it is the best you can do! 


It is important that you are able to read back your writing and check that it makes sense- if you can't read it, how can your audience read it? 


I look forward to seeing your revised story openings on Teams!